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since 2009-01-09
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between the sky and earth

0 posted 2009-01-28 12:01 PM



How they ask me
to live where there's o life
to breathe where there's no air
to see where there's no light
my dreams are there waiting me
but yet they seem away of my sight
is this my helplessness and despair
or just another blight
how i long to be free, not as they want me to be
Oh , i need some space
just to feel my path is right
would i ever be in that time and place
where i can touch the angel of me
and hold him tight
is that so much to ask that for it i plea
in a time that they all
live their ways day and night
so,how can they ask me to live
where there's no life
to breath where there's no air
to see where there's no light.



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