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Bill Shirnberg
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0 posted 01-24-2009 07:06 PM       View Profile for Bill Shirnberg   Email Bill Shirnberg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Bill Shirnberg's Home Page   View IP for Bill Shirnberg


Look there smell the acrid haste
On breath of chaos incarnate

After a short commercial break
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Bill Shirnberg
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1 posted 01-25-2009 09:21 PM       View Profile for Bill Shirnberg   Email Bill Shirnberg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Bill Shirnberg's Home Page   View IP for Bill Shirnberg

I wrote this on down wrong it's supposed to be

There see the smell of acrid haste?
On breath of chaos  incarnate

After a short commercial break
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2 posted 01-27-2009 04:09 PM       View Profile for turtle   Email turtle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for turtle

Well Bill,

I think you may have written this (on) down wrong again.

Perhaps you mean:

There(,) see the smell of acrid haste
(o)n breath of chaos incarnate(?)

(We'll be back) after a short commercial break(.)

Turtle
 
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