How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Critical Analysis #2 » perfection?
Critical Analysis #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic perfection? Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
dfcwer
New Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 2
0 posted 2008-12-07 11:13 PM


What is the true essence of perfection?

Does it truly exist in this world of yours?

Are you perfect I ask?

I would like to believe so

Alas it’s not true

For no man, woman nor child can be perfect

For life is not that sweet to reward the gift of perfection

Nor so bitter to deprive of achieving this feet



Yet with this said many fools

Choose not to head this warning

For perfection in their eyes is not so hard to achieve

I too am a fool for i have found perfection



So with this said perfection is too great of feet

Yet in my eyes I have been blessed

In a form of a angel

My angel only, my love CBW
© Copyright 2008 dfcwer - All Rights Reserved
shades_of_green
New Member
since 2008-12-17
Posts 8
1 posted 2008-12-17 09:34 PM

I could really relate to this poem, as I have often pondered the meaning of perfection myself (as most of us have). I think you  grounded an amorphous idea well.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Critical Analysis #2 » perfection?

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary