In a Jeep, Minnesota.
Poems are at the heigh of awesomeness levels when they are concise, and have a good message.
I do believe sir, that this is at it's height of awesomeness. I really enjoyed this poem, and I wish I could write something so short AND powerful... A daunting task.
The last line didn't flow for me, but that's probably because I live in the northern tundra... =]
Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.