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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-10-06 11:12 PM


Click,
Click,
Click,
My hidden passion,
Hidden deep within my heart,
My lust for love,
My need for revenge,
The Dancing Cats,
The Beautiful Bird,
The ring I wear,
The hate I bring,
I hide away,
In my sweet lullaby,
Just a click,
I find myself lost again,
In this deep passion,
None can hope to understand.

I'm not sure why it was written just that it came in a painting. May you forgive me for not answering what this passion is.

© Copyright 2008 Abigail Arnold - All Rights Reserved
dracula68
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since 2008-09-07
Posts 30
Illinois
1 posted 2008-10-08 04:57 AM


that's cool about not knowing, at this early stage of the poem, what the "passion" is. Sometimes poems can be made about finding answers to questions just like that one.
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