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chopsticks
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0 posted 2008-08-19 10:07 AM



When history is written about this  forum,
And we have had time to call on our wisdom,
Who will be this forum’s poet laureate.
Mister Deer, you are this forum’s favorite.


Btw, these  metrical forms  “ Iamb, trochee, , anapest, dactyl , spondee, and amphibrach,” do not need to be present throughout the whole poem or even the whole line, but should be the form which takes up most of the lines.


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Essorant
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1 posted 2008-08-19 11:17 AM



No doubt by then the Chopsticks on that day,
Shall be the King of Verse in every way.

chopsticks
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2 posted 2008-08-19 11:28 AM


I hope by then old Chopstick is a saint
and the king  is some kid name Essorant

Ron
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3 posted 2008-08-19 12:02 PM


quote:
Btw, these  metrical forms  “ Iamb, trochee, , anapest, dactyl , spondee, and amphibrach,” do not need to be present throughout the whole poem or even the whole line, but should be the form which takes up most of the lines.

Yes, but when to deviate is the key. Breaking meter should be a tool, not an excuse.



chopsticks
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4 posted 2008-08-19 04:38 PM


Yes, but when to deviate is the key. Breaking meter should be a tool, not an excuse.”

I agree Ron, you have to know the rules before you can break them .

“ I didn’t say I was the smartest just the prettiest “

Muhammad Ali


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