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Critical Analysis #2

Cauchy3

cauchy3
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 61

0 posted 2008-07-13 03:39 AM

Cauchy3¡K..
Cause I bust my styles to gods.
Joke the wild have jungle toys.
Cults are free and spheres are wild.
Wide in ranges the ranks are tight.

Taiwan tracks are feeling fine.
Very well are going times.
ZOIC-Powers mean their tastes.
China ZOIC-powers made.

Straiten straights china mean.
Under mannered all are taken.
Real is cycles power real.
Raw to deal is rebel games.

China ZOIC-powers dirty zoomed.
All are funny farms for fools.
Cauchy3 have means differ ways.
Cauchy3 will eat the rice as rats.

True to date is hey in days.
Trifle plots are cauchy3 that plan.
China powers back are slides.
All are PEELA hide in sides.
----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3----------

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Skippyrick
Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 150
Rohnert Park

1 posted 2008-07-15 11:26 AM

hi there:

just a few comments. I dont think that you need to repeat thinks. what I mean are is that you have repeated yourself too many times. I also think that you do not need to put your name into it.

skippy

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