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Bill Shirnberg
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since 2007-10-28
Posts 50
USA AOK

0 posted 2008-04-09 03:12 PM


Every time I write one its a country song I care that much for country songs that kinda weird but so am I


What can I do      

What can you say

Thiers hearts out thier breakin    

Most every day

No I’m not the only fool    

In this cold, lonesome town

Not the only desperado                  

That’s ever been down

That has ever been down



No their aint no other

But the crazy kind of love

Said their aint no other

But the crazy kind of love

Rollin in like thunder  

On the wings of a dove

Their just aint no other  

But the crazy kind of love



All those suns got to set  

All your coffee gets cold

Spin the wheel place your bets  

Win a woman to hold

Don’t you cry  should you lose  

Say this worlds done you wrong

Get a pawn shop guitar  

Learn to play a sad song

Learn to play a sad song



No their aint no other    

But the crazy kind of love

Said their aint no other    

But the crazy kind of love

Rollin in like thunder  

On the wings of a dove

Their just aint no other    

But the crazy kind of love



Like them good old boy’s          

On the old silver screen

Think you know what I’m say’n  

Think you know what I mean

Get out your dusty guitar            

Giddy up get along

Down that lonesome trail          

Strummin out a sad song
Strummin out a sad song



No their aint no other  

But the crazy kind of love

Said their aint no other  

But the crazy kind of love

Rollin in like thunder            

on the wings of a dove

No their aint no other                  

But the crazy kind of love

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Brad
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea
1 posted 2008-04-10 08:00 PM


Country songs, the best of them, usually involve some kind of story. I don't see one here.

Maybe I'm missing it, but that would be my advice: write a story.

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