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dwgpoet
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0 posted 2008-03-28 10:41 PM




TEAM verses: prophesy:ing
for play, pray and found ways to correction.
Three gifts borne, once A_muse_sing
myself met SAMs slaps; TEAM sent protection:

1.
Warned Sam, "create new personality."
SAM shunned the TEAM reflection.
Team received fruits of the Spirit from TEAM;
since Team's altar erection.

2.
Team slew by older bro Sam,
TEAM begot Seth, replaced Seed.
Wheat and weeds grew aside in crossed sections.
SAM's fruit: enmity, greed, weeds;
until our Seed's ransom: blood protection.


3.
A fires way clearing maps,
SAM tried to tangle, tear and teach abhor.
Scornful weeds thorned up to thistle and choke.
Our Team donned full suit: ArmOur.

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Paradise soon, new Team Nation
Genesis through Revelation.
Glued "Fruit" "Suit" and Meditation.
Team vows led to celebration.

"I shall prove to be, what I prove
to be:" Paradise Perfection
now restored;
TEAM adored.

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