I'm new here and not really a poetry expert or anything like that, but the two women at my door earlier today, with pamphlets written by god or someone who is pretty tight with the big man, told me, "I gotta give a little, to get a little".
It's a nice poem. I like some of the imagry. And I ain't trying to mean or nuth'n, but it seems too old fashioned, but in a way that it's really trying hard to be old fashioned, written by someone who ain't old fashioned but has read a lot of poetry like that. I dunno if that makes sense. Like I said, that ain't menat to be mean because it's a good poem. But hey, what do I now. I'm not very good a descecting poetry, but I'd like to learn.