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Critical Analysis #2
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RCat
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since 2008-02-16
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0 posted 2008-03-03 01:56 PM



if(???)this is

poet read then (any)thing is
not the knot witch ties
also disguise the

skies is falling “oh Love” young heathen eat my soul and…
stammering into the


McDonalds of


mind wholly swallow
ing

“cheese”

(((cheese)))


burgers!


vomit the verb
spilling the worm
turning the page of rage while scratching itself behind the

doggy styled ear,

“tis a vurk of art, yes?”




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