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dwgpoet
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0 posted 2008-01-24 03:14 AM




SAM curses captures Team souls
to indulge cravings for tree sovereignty.
We Sams chose touch, eat and steal,
Felled, swelled Rulership's Tempests; typhoon Sea.

Might is right. The best defense:
Offensive slander hypnotized winners;
in brain muddied swells: Deltas,
Commanding all to remain stained sinners.

Drove Us out of Garden, Huh!
Umm, touch all Team has, he won't tame his tongue.
Touch bone and flesh, and all Sams
deny Dads, dads deny Sons.

Wives divorce husbands. Husbands
stalk & beat wives. Our Fruits' Spirit tames Stars.
Our Spirit of the Air, TEAM
tried to trap. We rammed through in Bumper Cars.


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Our SAM Spirit will attack! Their fruitage of the spirit, we choke.
Our entantangled web with Bumper Cars brings wheat down to Lake of Smoke.
Sixty-Six books and Forty scribes will die. In veign We'll make their yoke.

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