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Faint Praise

oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24

Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA

0 posted 2007-06-24 02:21 PM

Faint Praise

Thank you, diabetes
For taking my right eye.
Perhaps I'll see as Milton saw
When the left one dies.

.) Jim

[This message has been edited by oceanvu2 (06-25-2007 05:12 AM).]

JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

1 posted 2007-06-25 11:30 AM

Nice revision on this one, Jim, adds far more depth.

I was reading Paradise Lost online (was supposed to be working but was really doing a little surfing) and came across the Dore prints. Simply amazing!

oceanvu2
Senior Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA

2 posted 2007-06-25 02:37 PM

Hi Jenifer: Thank you for noticing the revision, and your kind words.

Best, Jim

I don't know how to make one of those one-eyed winky-faces appear, so I've come up with .)

Katydid
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since 2007-07-24

Posts 19

3 posted 2007-07-28 10:05 PM

perfect!

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2007-07-28 11:05 PM

I heart your poems Jimbo.

This one is nothing less than I would expect. Flawless.

-paul

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