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ckpowell
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since 2007-04-23
Posts 5


0 posted 2007-04-23 07:23 PM


Poems dont always have to be serious, do they?
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Sleep all day
by: Casey Powell

Wine bottles line
the dusty dresser
the labels are torn
or
half-torn

cardinal,
keep my directions to
a point

the bottles ask,
"why did you sleep all day"
I simply give thanks-
i needed the extra rest.

© Copyright 2007 ckpowell - All Rights Reserved
oceanvu2
Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA
1 posted 2007-04-23 10:55 PM


Well, Chaucer could be pretty darned funny, even if he stole most of his jokes...
ckpowell
New Member
since 2007-04-23
Posts 5

2 posted 2007-04-24 12:24 PM


word?
carter07
Junior Member
since 2007-04-26
Posts 31

3 posted 2007-04-28 02:21 PM


Overrall enjoyed it. Got a little confused by the 'cardinal,
keep my directions to
a point'.

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