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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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0 posted 2007-03-27 03:55 PM


parting is such sweet sorrow
to not wake upon the morrow
to depart this life,onto the next
never to again take in a breath

what would one do in the land of the dead
if there is no where to go and no words to be said
freedom comes with its price
eternally free but without life

the loved ones left behind back home
must find some way to not be alone
take comfort from the memories
embrace the lost who are now free

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1 posted 2007-03-28 01:33 AM


free, indeed...
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