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rhia_5779
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0 posted 2007-03-21 04:36 PM


Warrior women known for their strength
Meant to leave their mark.
Forgotten and disbelieved
Despite their legendary start.

The goddess's of death
who ruled Africa with iron fist.
No longer take breath
WHY now  are they myth?

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Brad
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1 posted 2007-03-23 06:26 PM


quote:
Warrior women known for their strength
Meant to leave their mark.


This is a nice start.

goddess's ?

I think you could have a lot of fun here, but of course you're just scratching the tip of the iceberg (mixing metaphors again, Brad?). At any rate, I wouldn't let this one lie, I'd play around with the form one day, go free verse, then back to form, etc.

See what happens.



rhia_5779
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2 posted 2007-03-24 12:58 PM


I need a better title but goddess because they worshipped sopposedly goddess's of some kinda and the other civilizations at the time the europeans primarliy were afraid of t hem . They would kill men they found in battle and capture men in order to move their race forward and they killed or gave back the boy babies and adopted the girls.  
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