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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
The snow whitens my eyelashes like a cool border around a memoir. Eyes closed, my outer shell takes it all in speaking, I have forgiven you for being less than I wanted. My muse celebrates a winters breeze sedating the old haunting abysmal of, my I remember you. The motionless landscape then turns the air, "Where will you go now?" My path is marked by hope, heavily plowed by rain I will walk where the snow falls. ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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renathon Junior Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 23 |
I quite enjoyed that but then again I'm easy to please. Some of it is quite delicate and I like that. I just wonder about who or what your muse is and I wish I had one. Great work. |
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ChristianSpeaks Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 396Iowa, USA |
Welcome fellow Pacific Northwesterner- quote: What a wonderful opening. I thought this was a concise,well written piece. I don't know about the overall message. Good start though. |
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