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Flames of Desire

journie
Junior Member

since 2006-11-13

Posts 18
Missouri

0 posted 2006-11-13 01:16 PM

The flames of the fire dance in the middle of the night. The warmth and glow are such a delight. A bottle of chilled red wine, candles burning with ambiance. A bouquet of red roses adds to the fragrance that already flows. I look in your eyes and you look into mine. We gently drift off to our special place in time. Two hearts joined as one, tonight we live for each other. In the glow of the ambers you pour us wine. We entwine our arms and elegantly take a sip never leaving our warm embrace. Forever together we will be, in the light of the fire I pledge my eternity.

ChristianSpeaks
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 396
Iowa, USA

1 posted 2006-11-13 01:20 PM

Journie-

I read this in Open not a moment ago, and now, poof, it's here in CA. Few things:

-I encourage you to read the guidelines for posting. You may want to look around a bit and see what CA is all about.
-It is encouraged that you reply to several other posts before you post something of your own.
-You may want to modify your critique message to help those who critique.
-Welcome to PIP. I hope you enjoy your stay.

CS

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