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Always and forever

loveislove
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 59
USA

0 posted 2006-07-13 04:08 PM

this is kind of a song but its too short to be a song but its kind of a poem, if i could think of some more too add to it then it would be a song so....idk lol

I've never been good at this
I can never let you see my emotions
But I have to let you know
I love you
Always and forever
no matter what
Nothing will stop it
Cuz i'll always love you
I know I've hurt you
You've hurt me too
You say you'll always love me
YOu want to be with me forever
I didnt believe it
Didnt believe you
But im sure what i tell you is true
I love you
Always and forever
No matter what
Nothing can stop it
Cuz i'll always love you

Shaddow1
Junior Member

since 2006-09-04

Posts 41
Kingman Az, USA

1 posted 2006-09-04 02:46 PM

I like it and yes if you add more baby you can make it into a song. I feel I can relate to this poem. It reminds me of the situation my ex and I are in. Keep tryin to revise it and add more. You never know what will become of it. And good luck!

Love is like a Rose; it always dies - Britney Miller

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