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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
U.F.O. Hey! Look at that Look at that! Look! WOW! |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
ok ok. So it's unidentified. So what? ...and it read's like your comments to others-no substance. You must be posting in critical analysis for a private giggle, because I can't see any other reason, as in to improve your poetry and to improve your reading skills, otherwise you'd be more communicative. |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Sometime I do not have any substance left. That was a very good call. Howver, the privit giggle is very much required. Long story. Anyway, I do want to say positive things about peoples work. And at this stage of my indifference to this that and other things substance itself is hard to come by. "Sitting here in limbo waiting for the dice to roll". And only faith itself keeps telling me the dice are going to roll. |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
What are you waiting for? It's your throw. |
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Skippyrick Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 150Rohnert Park |
Yes by all means throuw the dice. Or pick up a deck of cards, playing or taro, make that a deck for old maid or Uno. rick |
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YeshuJah Member
since 2002-08-20
Posts 65FL USA |
Do you honestly believe this remotely qualifies as poetry? Good God man! At leaset show some respect for the stated purpose of this forum. YeshuJah. |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
I think that's the point, Yeshujah. There is no respect here. Mr.Torres has already stated his indifference. A contradiction, considering the comment about faith. |
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