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synthetic
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since 2006-06-10
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ontario, canada

0 posted 2006-06-11 06:45 PM


top fifty playing
you rank top two
the top pair to be found
is me and you.

did you like the sex
do you like me now.

do you like it when the crowd
gives us their time
gives us their words
follows us in verbs because we work.

meet me on the bus
our privacy can wait
we've got critics to face
memories to place
shout out the windows look at us now
knowing that i'm behind you looking proud.

the perfect couple
we'll stand the test of time
we'll stand the test of greatness
we'll stand above the rest
don't fall without me
i won't rise without you
this is before i met you
clearly that's proof.


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