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Skippyrick
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since 2006-05-16
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Rohnert Park

0 posted 2006-06-04 01:23 PM


Just for fun.

COFFEE AT WAYNO’S
(make that Café)

no a
Cafe Mocha Cappuccino Frappe
Triple shot with Almond Rocca
no wait

make that
Coffee Blonde and a Bagel
Wait not a Bagel I’ll have Tiramisu
for two

a la mode
Vanilla bean ice cream
No make that a fresh fruit bowl
and

house coffee
Strong organic Peruvian humming bird safe
Slow roasted with a humble-berry scone
no wait

I’m a jumble
far away from Dark Jumble town
coffee in all three hands what wait
I’m asleep in Rome


© Copyright 2006 Rick Slottow - All Rights Reserved
Skippyrick
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since 2006-05-16
Posts 150
Rohnert Park
1 posted 2006-06-12 01:17 PM


Funny?  I just have to wonder about all of you people here.  why do we comment on poems we do not think as poems.  Or post just to let me know that a spelled a word wrong.  I I enjoy writing and reading my poems out-load. Sometimes that is the reason some words are there. they help in the flow of the sound poem when heard.  WHAT THINK?

Rick

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