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Ethan M. O'Callahan
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0 posted 2006-02-27 03:05 PM



And every different face
And every different name
And every different time
It always feel the same
And so I've gotten to wondering
Do I feel anything
Or am I imagining
Or am I remembering

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1 posted 2006-02-27 10:52 PM


it flows very well. cant think of any thingbad about it. its wonderful

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

MUSEconnieSEconnie
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since 2006-02-28
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2 posted 2006-03-02 08:15 PM


I AM NEW HERE.  BUT I DO WANT TO GET MY FEET WET WITH REVIEWS.  I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT IS VERY DIFFERENT AND MADE ME THINK A LOT!

I HAD A SMALL SUGGESTION I HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER (THE CAPS ARE JUST HOW I WRITE DUE TO MY EYESITE I AM NOT SHOUTING AT YOU>LOL)

And every different face
And every different name
And every different time
It always feelS the same

>SO I GOT TO WONDERING

Do I feel anything
Or am I JUST imagining
Or am I JUST remembering
>>OR AM I JUST...
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>ONE LESS BEAT AND BETTER FLOW
>>SO READER CAN JOIN IN WITH OWN THOUGHTS

FEEL FREE TO DISREGARD MY RAMBLINGS!

THIS IS A GOOD WRITE AS IS.  MANY THANKS FOR LISTENING.  PLEASE REWIEW ONE OF MY POEMS IF YOU HAVE TIME.
LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER
MUSEconnieHUES

I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS.  MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES

MsSouthernOrchid
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since 2003-07-12
Posts 192

3 posted 2006-03-03 12:26 PM


  I enjoyed this one. I think it's very good.
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