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0 posted 2005-11-16 02:19 PM



She exists among the chaos,
She's her own downfall,
As if she had no choice, or say
As if she were a rag doll
Swept away by other's wishes.
Doesn't see at all.

She does not see that it could be
Different for her.
Taking on tasks not meant for her.
She complains to me
"I'll be glad when this is over."
She just doesn't see.

She changes all things, like some tide
That sweeps over us
Trying to change the features all
Just causing us stress.
I am the one who will be glad
when this is over.

"Relationships are the one tangible connection we have with God" - Purpose Driven Life

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