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Critical Analysis #2

For peace

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-07-17 02:21 PM

Crystal rising atop the brim,
Bringing the serenity that was left,
Prometheus rest upon this mountain top,
Leaving all to wonder about his end,

And then-
The quietness that was subdued,
Risen from the hollow earth,
Calmly as the ocean breeze colliding with the waves,

The hollowed tip stems held the aroma
Of once a beautiful flower,
Now turned ether and melted away,
Laden in the barren sea,

Just as the shine started to disappear,
Came a chilling reminder,
Of what heroes are made in battle,
The ones who gave their darling today.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

1 posted 2005-07-19 11:44 AM

You blew this one right over my head. I'm sure the problem is mine but I can't make any sense of it.

Always Lisa
Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 133

2 posted 2005-08-05 07:30 PM

Darling buds of fall that fell too soon.

Just an old thought/line in a poem of mine that came again to play after reading this.

Always Lisa

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