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netsky
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since 2005-03-29
Posts 148
Miami

0 posted 2005-04-10 02:12 AM


Object: employ the subject word, "donnybrook", in an epigramatic poem about, for and -only to illustrate- the subject word


Fluff with a purpose: fun

"Zindu" supplies the definition from which I work in her "word of today" thread at another board:



Today's word is DONNYBROOK
donnybrook means

1 : free-for-all, brawl
2 : a usually public quarrel or dispute

The reason why I picked this word, is because I think the story behind the word is interesting to know

"The Donnybrook Fair was an annual event held in Donnybrook—then a suburb of Dublin, Ireland—from the 13th to the 19th centuries. The fair was legendary for the vast quantities of liquor consumed there, for the number of hasty marriages performed during the week following it, and, most of all, for the frequent brawls that erupted throughout it. Eventually, the fair's reputation for tumult was its undoing. From the 1790s on there were campaigns against the drunken brawl the fair had become. The event was abolished in 1855, but not before its name had become a generic term for a free-for-all.".
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-donnybrook-


"Hey nonny nonny!
you damn fool ninny!"
shouted Glenn at brother Donny
at Donnybrook Fair

Donny stood and took it
but he really could not brook it
so he knifed and sliced Glenn thin.
A donnybrook unfair


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longte
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since 2005-04-06
Posts 199
Australia
1 posted 2005-05-11 07:07 AM


This is still one of my favourites of yours

Cannot understand no other comments

Live It

merlynh
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 411
deer park, wa
2 posted 2005-05-30 06:22 PM


The information you give was interesting.  But I felt you should also incorporate it into your poem.  Poems with a story are quite popular and well known.  Alas I give up poetry years ago to presume other writing endeavors.  Below is an example of what I’m suggesting with some of the information you supplied.

A free-for-all and brawls
A few drunken marriages
Was Donnybrook Fair

When
Bagpipes were blowing
For our brother Glenn

“Hey nonny noony!”
you damn fool ninny!”
Glenn had shouted

To borther Donny
Who could not brook it
So he knifed and sliced Glenn thin.

In Dublin.



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