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netsky
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0 posted 2005-03-31 10:59 PM



Our Aunty Prudence disrespects
those who aim to disestablish
ties of England's Church to State.

Her hot Protests  of angry Ire
land on the deaf ears of those men
who tarry not in grasping goals;
who also aim for an arcane
anti-jingo  jism-ism


antidisestablishmentarianism

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1 posted 2005-04-01 12:26 PM


an arcane
anti-jingo  jism-ism


Ya took the longest word in the booktionary,,,and made a ditty,,,,mondo cool ,,,,,I like this line,,,,it rolls

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2 posted 2005-04-02 12:00 PM


Fluff, of course but you knew that. Nice play on a long word. I don't think you can make a career of that but it was sort of fun.

netsky
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3 posted 2005-04-02 01:36 AM


fluff is my aim.  Seriousity is not often my game

yeah, it's great to have your inputs.. I want blunt and I get it here.  Thanks

The "versaword" sort of poem is fun for me because it -has a purpose- of sorts (vocab and word-sensing practice) and it's nonsense, with a twist of sense.

that's how I see my form.. most of my versawords fall short of this one.  

Do smile or crit freely. I so much enjoy these frank inputs.  They help me. You help me.  thanks,

reid


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4 posted 2005-04-18 01:23 AM


You like experimental poetry don't you? This is fun!
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