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Critical Analysis #2

Love is a River

Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

0 posted 2005-01-13 06:58 PM

Love is a river
ever changing as it flows...
and occassionally disembarks
from the path it once chose.
It bubbles and churns-
runs shallow and deep...
and some dry up
in the raging stillness of heat.

The currents move differently
through channels and pools,
and in the right dosage
refreshes and cools.

Love, unlike water
can't be bottled or sold.
It comes from the heart
and is NEVER cold.

This was written 2/9/2000 during my abnormal psych
class...coincidence? *grins* anyway. I wrote this for my beau (who is now my hubby) for Valentine's day, and because i was kinda thirsty.

"Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2005-01-14 09:56 PM

that second line just spoils it for me. cant help but think of garth brooks.

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

2 posted 2005-01-15 12:35 PM

I loved it Miss Abagail...all the lines!

"Love, unlike water
can't be bottled or sold.
It comes from the heart
and is NEVER cold."

I think that those were my favorites though! :} Thanks for sharing! -- Becka

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