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b.costen
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since 2003-11-02
Posts 107
ontario, CAN

0 posted 2004-12-14 03:38 AM


You look different during sex
These bodies are real
The fire of Hell
Capitalized, even

My heart hits my brain with an audible ring
You suggest that I come soon
Or we’ll both become two planets
I want spirals

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merlynh
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 411
deer park, wa
1 posted 2004-12-19 08:33 PM


"You look different during sex"  I think almost everyone does, but this is the first time I've ever heard someone say it.

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