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Essorant
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0 posted 2004-07-26 01:57 AM


Wonder


Flesh bone vessel sea
Air womb bedroom sky
Foam light fire sphere
Life day forest eye


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Essorant
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1 posted 2004-07-27 12:54 PM


This is freeverse.
Not A Poet
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2 posted 2004-07-27 01:03 PM


Yes, a little too free for me. Sorry but I don't get anything from it.

Essorant
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3 posted 2004-07-27 06:33 PM


What did you expect?
May not poet show work even when he is losing his mind?

[This message has been edited by Essorant (07-27-2004 08:16 PM).]

hush
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4 posted 2004-07-28 02:21 AM


Well, yeah, you can show work, but that doesn't mean we have to like it... sorry, that was a joke...

'Flesh bone vessel sea'

This is the most interesting sounding of the four lines... however, like pete, I don't get it. How are all the nouna in this poem connected? What does it mean? Even the words in the lines don't seem to ge together, and I can't discern a pattern or meaning to it.

Hope I've helped.

Essorant
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5 posted 2004-07-31 12:09 PM


'Flesh bone vessel sea' = Mortality


Does that clear it up a bit?

Thanks for giving this a chance.  I usually don't write in this manner


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