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Critical Analysis #2

Dream

rabab
New Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 8
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-12-23 04:14 PM

I have a dream,
Words echoed in the streets
Shouted out by a man preaching equality,
They end his life but fail to his dream.

The fiery voice of my Che,
Echoing still in my heart,
Raising the head of the dispossess.
Giving his life for us all.

Here is a story of a man;
Who gave his freedom for his dream,
For his men he gave his sun,
So they might all be seen
Not by skin but only by deed.

This is a story of a simple man
Draped in white in his simple life.
Nothing is simple though in his deeds
The way he broke centuries bond
Showed us change that can be done
Not with guns but with love.

These are dreams of the few
Of the many that remains untold.
Who inspire to make us see,
Change is that starts with a dream.

gourdmad
Member

since 2003-12-01

Posts 136
Upper Ohio Valley

1 posted 2003-12-23 05:43 PM

I saw a kid in a tee shirt.
He was pierced, hair punked way.
Binary code covered the shirt,
made an image of Che

I stopped him and looked in his eye
"Who is that, do you know?"
in a tone that caught his eye
He ah, ahed; I let go

So let Che rest;
it's for the best.
Try a new test
in belly quest

rabab
New Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 8
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-12-24 02:40 PM

Loved the reply Gourdmad...........
Thanks

a123
Member

since 2004-03-27

Posts 72

3 posted 2004-03-28 04:33 AM

r u talking about who i think you r or have i got it all wrong?

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