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Critical Analysis #2

A Fight for Life

Brigid WillowKeeper
Member

since 2003-08-24

Posts 88
OHIO IN USA

0 posted 2003-12-13 10:45 PM

I'm tattered.
I'm torn.
I'm battered.
I'm worn.

I'm burnt.
The pain is a hard hit.
It hurts.
So this is it.

In the deepest valley,
of the darkest night,
I'm not lost.
I'm only trapped.
And I am losing this fight.

The fight of life.

A war inside my head.
Rages from the living dead.

I walk away bruised,
but am caught by
a neuce.

In the deepest valley,
of the darkest night,
I'm not lost.
I'm only trapped.
And I'm losing this fight.

The fight for life.

I'm tattered.
I'm torn.
I'm battered.
I'm worn.

Demonic Screams.
Bloody Hell.
Shattered dreams.
Muddy fell.

Obsidian night.
Onyx day.
The raven takes flight
so miserably gay.

[This message has been edited by Brigid WillowKeeper (12-14-2003 12:22 AM).]

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

1 posted 2003-12-13 11:16 PM

Check your email.

Brigid WillowKeeper
Member

since 2003-08-24

Posts 88
OHIO IN USA

2 posted 2003-12-14 12:24 PM

I did. Should I just take down some of the poems I posted, or what?

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