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kadafi09
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0 posted 2003-11-23 01:14 PM


I apologize to everyone for having started that argument with that nameless person. I apoligize to the moderators. I apologize to the administrators. I apologize to myself for having wasted my own time. I apologize to my laptop for having typed that nonsense. I apologize to you all. I even apologize to you. You know who you are. I just have to say, it ends now. No more arguing, no more. Forgive me everybody. It will happen no more. My pride was hurt when my intelligence, my literacy, and my means of expression was questioned. He had no right to say that, but I had no right to respond like that. I forgot what this forum is about. So, to the member's area I'll go. I have some reading to do. So, I end this with my apology again. I apologize for all my errors and his too. My words offended and your words offended me, but they also offended you. I'm sorry for everything. Forgive me.  

© Copyright 2003 Jorge Vega - All Rights Reserved
Ramjam
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since 2003-11-23
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1 posted 2003-11-23 01:23 PM


man dat is one kewl prosey poem no lin brakes = prosey peom ok? . it wuz frm da hert i cn see that witch mkes it specail.  gud job on it.

best rj

kadafi09
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2 posted 2003-11-23 01:25 PM


Hey, thanks alot. I'm glad you liked it.
Not A Poet
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3 posted 2003-11-23 01:34 PM


Apology accepted. No real harm done, thanks to Severn. Sometimes discussions can get a little heated and we just need to keep it under control before someone really does get offended.

BTW, I'm not so sure that RJ comment was a compliment. But then you probably already understood that but handled it well in either case.

Pete

Illigitimi Non Carborundum

Ramjam
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4 posted 2003-11-23 01:44 PM


hey man mr pete wut do u mean? i though that wus 1 nice prosey apology peom, dont u go listenin to this hear mr pete mr kadafi i liked wut you said i telled it str8 man.  u stirrin things mr pete jus cause u didnt lik my peom.  

u want me outta ur 4rum u jus say de wd an im outta here man i jus cam to lern.  

mr kafadi i likd ur poem sir.

thnkx a lot mr pete

best rj

kadafi09
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5 posted 2003-11-23 01:50 PM


whatever it may be, i appreciate the words.
hush
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6 posted 2003-11-23 02:39 PM


*scratches head*

What?

Poet deVine
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7 posted 2003-11-23 03:53 PM


Even my cat thanks you - I conveyed your apology to her as she usually sits beside me while I read and wanted to make sure she wasn't offended. You never know when you'll need a good 'mouser'! Don't let the world get you down!
kadafi09
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8 posted 2003-11-24 03:46 PM


*scratches head*
oh, sorry, I sometimes confuse myself too.

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