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buckysimone Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27 |
shaking your hand underneath masks of jesters and lies disillusioned by smiles of youths scents of elderly homes homes to the friends friends of abusive lives living the lives the lives through thick pricket paths dirty tattered jeans rough fingernails runaway paths surrounded mirages of roses finding exits exits never to exist in a life of dirty paper bags cries for help grab my hand my savior shaking your hand underneath |
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Ramjam Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 21 |
I dunno dat I lik the writting all in the center lik dat it kinda makes it dificcult to read I quit like the repettion of homes an fiends an lives an paths an exits an exists ect ect etc plus I thik that dat line through thick pricket paths is a stunner man u go grl but trash de pansy centerin eh? best rj |
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