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bgryan
Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 30
North Ireland

0 posted 2003-11-16 02:25 PM



Look into the looking glass
See what you can find
Look through the looking glass
Nothing is the same.

Do you hear the breeze
Whispering your name
Now is the time
Live your life again.

Colours of red, blue and green
Gold before your eyes
Touch the air
Is this a last goodbye?

Look into the looking glass
See what you can find
Look through the looking glass
Nothing is the same.

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kadafi09
Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
1 posted 2003-11-21 08:22 PM


i felt that your poem has a deeply profound meaning behind it, yet it was lost on me. could u explain it?
Ramjam
Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 21

2 posted 2003-11-23 02:18 PM


no offense man but this kinda sounnds lik a song or sumthing lik it shld by liricks not a peom but dont get me wrng i licked it a lot very lyrickall i licked the sound

best rj

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