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The Daze We Enjoyed
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The Daze We Enjoyed |
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indian-juan New Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 3 |
they assemble to see and hear great things they've come to expect such from you is born prowess and command shining peepholes like stars cut in the black cloak of space i breathed in the thick molasses air i thought of you and startled a word recalling the daze we enjoyed words bursting with whimsy thoughts aloft upon the breeze i like the rest stood in awe anticipating your presence inspiration trying to understand your brilliance barely breaking the surface of your depths i took the plunge sank deep and blind to contemplate your very mind |
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Seth Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 74Arizona |
I'm a fan of the books too. ~Seth |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
PUNCTUATION! Long before I finished reading, I was completely mentally ut of breath. Words, sentences and thoughts just run together to the point of being unintelligible. JMHO, Pete |
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