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Loyal to the Hive
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Loyal to the Hive |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts 
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Bee stings – Feel the pinch, nerves twitch as memory pierces skin Pluck the stinger buried in layers, reach for the band aid as you lick the wound Beneath gauze blankets, pretend you don’t feel -- that your muscles don’t ache from resisting the urge to swat the swarm Faithfully, you sit by the hive -- dripping salt from your wounds and honey from your lips Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... [This message has been edited by Ladybug (07-23-2003 09:32 PM).] |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Ladybug, Wonder why reading this made me think of my marriage and ex? LOL hmmmm. Good one. |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Haha, yeah it definitely could represent an unhappy relationship/marriage. I actually wrote this about a friend I've known since childhood. Glad you enjoyed the poem, thanks for the feedback!  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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