navwin » Archives » Critical Analysis #2 » untitled # 47.56
Critical Analysis #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic untitled # 47.56 Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
raevynsbreath
Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 64
Mi, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 10:50 PM



there was a little girl
sitting in a tree
i was wandering by
and she called out to me

"remember dear friend,
with every beginning
is an end.
so treat it kindly."

i scratched my head and walked on

two days later
no reason why
i found myself sitting
and began to cry

years flew by
i remember that day
when the little girl
took my ignorance away

at the time
i never understood
but with time
she knew i would

there was an old man
wise beyong his years
children laugh
sun dries his tears

"remember dear child
like is a place.
feelings aren't mild.
so experience all you can."

puzzled giggles fill a sudden silence

© Copyright 2003 _rae - All Rights Reserved
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Critical Analysis #2 » untitled # 47.56

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary