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tarynml
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since 2003-07-12
Posts 1
pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-07-12 12:31 PM


The Flood

i was counting the days
since we last talked
and then the floodgates opened
and i was filled to bursting...
I walk around now with my head up
yet constantly looking with scorching eyes
over my shoulder and behind my back.
water with a sharp crystalline surface
only so cold you cant help but be numb
and then stopping
knee deep in this puddle of mine
laughing at the current.
so now my brain cant handle all this
so ill retract to my sleepy state
and look at this photograph
of this happy young girl
well i forgot
that its me.

© Copyright 2003 Taryn L - All Rights Reserved
kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
1 posted 2003-07-12 12:10 PM


nice job.
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