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Critical Analysis #2

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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2003-06-19 01:19 AM

the day is new;
so a smile for you
and cheer
and laughter galore
but below the surface
deep down in my heart
there is always so much more

more than just smiles
and joy
and cheer
there's sadness
and pain
confusion
and fear

so don't always assume
that one's life is all well
what you see on the outside
is not enough to tell

there's always more
than meets the eye
hidden from view
deep down inside

Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality
~DreamChild~

D'sWhisper
Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 68
Washington, USA

1 posted 2003-06-19 05:39 AM

Some of the most beautiful people I know have stones slung from shallow judgements every day. This is great in it's telling, you did an awsome job IMHO. ~DW~

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

2 posted 2003-06-20 01:24 PM

Hi DreamChild, very well done. There is always more than meets the eye.

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

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