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Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-18 07:32 PM



my little nieace how you grown,
how i wish you were still young
again,we spent more time together then

i miss seeing your cute little face
as you grab ahold of my dress.. what a
beatiful young lady you are turning out
to be

In so many ways you
remind me of me. It warms my heart that you
ask your dear aunt for advice makes me feel
like you still need me

ill always be here for you
my little one. always rember
that no matter how old
you get your still my baby.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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kadafi09
Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
1 posted 2003-06-18 09:12 PM


beautiful poem. made me think of all the little kids i met while i was volunteering as a soccer coach
~DreamChild~
Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
2 posted 2003-06-19 01:16 AM


thats_real_nice.

Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality
                ~DreamChild~

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