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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-11 03:44 PM



hell fire rage
caged inside of you
i have lost sight of you
still your posion is in me
get away from me stay the hell
away from me hurt desire fire
passion i want to take another lashing
im ready to be beaten and broken
i wont be mistaken for i see it in your
eyes the lies and desperation for one last time
i will invade your soul and clean your mind and take the to the
open place of the denial and the past i will i shall it will be
all will see

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
1 posted 2003-06-20 09:11 PM


is_this_drug_related?

Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality
                ~DreamChild~

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2006-08-27 04:04 PM


its to do with an ex bf that i kept going back to even though he wasnt a good guy.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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