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If Only I Was A Poet
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If Only I Was A Poet |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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If I was a poet I’d write you words of love If that’s the only way to be with you Wish I could grow wings and fly Instand of calling crying why? Something had to make you leave The sunlight shines through the moonlit sky Could not hide beneath the rays of light Holding onto you tight Wished in my arms you lay that night I’d dream of a place for us to be Where I could see you smile at me And my pen would take me there But only…. Only if I was a poet I could write that dream of love |
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raevynsbreath Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 64Mi, USA |
okay. i kinda like the flow of this, but it's a little hard hard to follow. try changing some of the wording and the rhyming and see what you can do there. all you need is a little touchup and this should be pretty good. _rae |
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