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Feeding The Beast
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Feeding The Beast |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Feeding The Beast Awake, get up! I’m still thirsty Sipll a few drops more on my dry tongue What? you have shed enough blood for me? Silence, pawn. I can play you until your veins run empty Your knife is my marionette You hands are my own Oh, hush, daarling, don’t be afraid And come closer, won’t you? Spare me just a few more shavings of your skin Or just one more cup to soothe my poor parched throat Have pity on an ancient beast There’s a good dear now I trully must comment you Quite delicious, really Oh, don’t cry It can’t hurt that much Besides, you like it anyways Oh shush! I know you do. What’s that? Yes, I love you too Ssssss, now, more blood |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
Interesting, I wonder if it's the devil or a snake.  |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
You don't describe the beast. As a result, I'm stuck picturing the beast from "The Beauty and the Beast" (Disney style). Still, this dialogue poem might be better served by giving the victim the lines, not the bad guy. |
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