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dreadfulhate22
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since 2003-05-04
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0 posted 2003-05-04 09:45 PM



The insanity is just to much


hidden feelings unable to touch


i cry and cry but the tears are dry


and from the pain i wanna die


the bitterness is what makes me whole


as the hatred eats away my soul


and when death finnaly surrounds me


you will see how it will be


and darkness will come into the light


as day will come into the night


the suffering is long past due


as it coldy wiats for you


and finnaly at the wake of dawn


all the chaos is done and gone.


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1 posted 2003-05-05 02:09 PM


Hello 22,

and welcome to the CA forum. It's good to hear a new voice. Please check our guidelines and join in the discussions of poetry.

Pete

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