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Critical Analysis #2
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aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26
Posts 256
0 posted 2003-02-05 03:01 AM


It's really short.  Tell me what you think.

"Passive"

fickle fickle Fate
with everything laid out in time
your predictable monotony
which I do hate
leaves no room for debate
were I so inclined.


ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.
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Gamree
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 10
1 posted 2003-02-05 09:35 AM

I like the poem, I was trying to figure out if it was rhyming or not, and if so what the rhythm was.  But once I put that aside and just read the words I liked it more
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