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kram
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since 2003-01-17
Posts 20
texas

0 posted 2003-01-17 01:25 PM



coloring
outside of lines
bleeding
across conservative borders
in the name of artistic license
forgetting
to live with those lines
trespassing affection
soils
the virgin canvas

lost
in the beauty
of distorted faces drawn by a child
no-neck bodies
circle hands with three bulbous fingers
wandering
into a make believe world devoid of truth
forgetting
to bring her reality

her garage
a grey concrete desert
thirsting
for color
a vanilla wall
hungers
for chocolate syrup
or interior eggshell
behind the wall
a man
unseen
waits to be fed

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hohenstein
New Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 9

1 posted 2003-01-17 07:49 PM


what a beautifully vivid image. bleeding over conservative lines is so insightful of the way our hearts are willing to go where our minds may stop. thats my inerpritation of course. ill definately look for more.
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