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rOxXbabY391
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0 posted 2002-12-15 05:46 PM


I'm done pretending that I'm alright
Acting like day, when I feel like night
I'm done pretending that everything is okay
Like I can make it through one more day
Cause I know that I'm not
And it just doesn't seem fair
I don't know if you know, or that you even still care
Not sure if I can pretend even one more night
'Cause how to you answer "What's wrong?"
-when nothing is right-

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rOxXbabY391
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since 2002-12-14
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1 posted 2002-12-17 03:59 PM


Hey i'm playing w/ titles for this.. help me out if ya can
~*~e~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right.

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