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Critical Analysis #2
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blazed
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since 2002-12-12
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0 posted 2002-12-12 09:17 PM

i wanna speak my mind
on one particular kind
of human bein' that i'm seein'
when i'm out gettin' mine
you've got frats and sororities
these brats of majorities
that submit to authority
and commit to conformity
what a catastrophy
these freaks that are after me
want to attack me
and destroy my identity
who could be free
in a world that believes
that if you're not a sheep
you're a social disease
and you choke all the flowers
like some kind of weed
whats the causality
theres goes a part of me
what was the casualty
my individuality
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