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Essorant
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0 posted 2002-11-16 07:59 PM



The pearly moon sits
on profoundness fullfilling
plenilunitude.


© Copyright 2002 Essorant - All Rights Reserved
Radrook
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1 posted 2002-11-18 10:59 PM


Is "plenitude" the word intended?

Essorant
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2 posted 2002-11-19 12:23 PM


Plenitude is part of it.


Radrook
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3 posted 2002-11-19 03:13 AM


I gave the word to the online dictionary and it could not find a definition. Is this a word you made up?
Munda
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4 posted 2002-11-19 06:32 AM


I think "plenilunitude" is made up out of plenitude and luna, which makes perfect sense to me in this context. Of course it could be my Dutch mind making this up, but if I'm correct, this is what I call creative writing.
Not A Poet
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5 posted 2002-11-19 09:31 AM


I agree Munda. In this case, a made up word works fine for me too.

Pete

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6 posted 2002-11-19 10:31 PM


'...plenilunitude...', well, I have never seen this word before and neither has my Websters, but I like the idea of luna and plenitude and the title sure got my attention.

Nice job.  Hugs, Marti

Essorant
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7 posted 2002-11-20 12:00 PM


Radrook
I will have to notify them that thier dictionary is missing a word  

I hope you still liked the Haiku.


Munda
You are spot on     Thanks for your kind comment.


Not A Poet
You always have a keen nostril for smelling out sense too
Glad you enjoyed.


NewEnglandlazurlu
It s my second haiku ever.  Thanks for taking the time to read and enjoy.  

take care,
Essorant

[This message has been edited by Essorant (11-20-2002 12:03 PM).]

Radrook
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8 posted 2002-11-21 04:43 AM


I like the poem.
I was just wondering about the meaning.
I did initially notice the "luna" part but wanted to make sure that I was understanding the usage right.

Thanks for sharing!
God bless!


Essorant
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9 posted 2002-11-22 12:48 PM


Thank You Radrook.
Epicrean
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10 posted 2002-11-23 01:04 PM


its simply great... your word plenilunitude adds the very twist to tie it all together and hit home!
Essorant
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11 posted 2002-11-24 03:30 AM


Epicrean
Thanks for stopping by to read.  I'm glad to know you enjoyed.


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